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05/07/2020

butterfly moments
unfolding eternities
lifted on heartbeats

From → haiku, poetry

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  1. Poetry Makes Politics
    Philosophy
    Religion
    Bearable
    Haiku’s
    Fly Higher
    Without
    Names
    iN
    Wings..:)

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    • I think you’re right, at least for this one. The first line makes the name redundant wordplay.
      It’s a bit unhaiku too. A smear of onebluntedness.
      And there’s the kitsch image …

      Maybe I should pretend it’s ironic and tag it punk.

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    • And when you think about it, doesn’t a name make haiku into haibun?

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      • i Don’t Do
        Haiku.. Haibun..
        Or Kung Fu
        Only Fredku
        Fredbun
        And
        Fredfu
        Just
        For
        Puns
        And Fun
        And other F’s
        As Again
        Air
        Doesn’t
        Care
        with
        Any F’s Either..:)

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